Well Done and a very Clean Presentation...
You did very well with your use of sprites, it flowed well when Link was walking. You cant say much for style other than the fact that you didnt completely trash this, leaving room for the part. Hopefully you intend to apply a well scripted plot to make up for the lack of animation, sprites are over used. You did well with your Music editing, the fading etc... There was no action, im sure you have plans for that later in this series. There really was no interactivity, its a game, and humor didnt seem to be noticable...
Overall, you did it well and i hope your plans for the next part contain something more exciting than Link running around collecting items, as of now there barely is a story