Score: 5

"Amazing story board"

submission: StoryBoard 1

date: August 2, 2008

You can tell you put a lot of work into this. You need to resubmit it with a title page/loader and give a brief introduction as to what it is, or else other NG user will see it as trash.

This is a great example for new animators to get a sense of what it takes to make a animated short. Extablishing a Animatic prior to jumping into all the detail really helps make a story and animation crisp.

Your drawings are well done, and you have a great look to your project already. Keep it up, and I look forward to seeing the final product.

Score: 8

"I enjoyed it..."

submission: Noidzor

date: August 1, 2007

For an old school styled game, you really added you own unique flavor. As was suggested, I think you should definitely work on the graphics a little more.

As a fan of role playing, and fantasy, I liked the theme. I played until I died, and felt challenged at each level.

If your interested in developing a newer version, I'd more than glad to help with the graphics. Simply check out my website, or contact me here on NG.

Score: 7

"Very nice look"

submission: TRACER episode 1

date: July 22, 2007

The look of it was amazing, and you definitely got a feel for the atmosphere within the animation. The shortness really kills that feeling, I'm sure you put a lot of work into animating this, but to really keep your viewers glued is to give them more of this in one dose.

Over all great work!

Score: 9

"Good work."

submission: Malice and Mayhem Pt. 1

date: April 22, 2007

I must say I'm normally impressed by fight scene flashes, but you took the time to give your character's bodies. i hate when people put tons of work in their animations, and end up using stick figures.

Score: 7

"I like..."

submission: The One Hour FBF Collab

date: April 16, 2007

I like to see people successfully come together and produce good work. You all did very nice, and each one of you presented a strength. If I may suggest, in the future you all could take on partial rolls in all aspects of the development of a flash animation.

For example, many of you were good at FbF, where as a few of you really took the time to create BGs. Working together, you all could create a more uniform, and less diverse piece without all the hassle of doing it yourself.

Score: 8

"Funny"

submission: Dave the Hungry Dinosaur

date: April 10, 2007

nice animation, with a great pun at the end. Liked the fact that since the character was a dinosaur, he ate the hotdog boy.

If your big on art/animation feed back check out the Kreeper's Lair.

Score: 10

"Great!"

submission: Dumbbell

date: February 6, 2007

I loved the character animation, as well as the concept. Beautiful.

Continue to entertain us all!

Score: 7

"Very well done"

submission: In My Dreams

date: December 11, 2006

Very good look.

You can tell your a BrakenWood Forum user, plus I myself have seen you around on there myself. I don't mean to auction your credit off to Adam as most people will do...

It's just obvious that you have taken his teachings and recreated your own work. Its very good, and I found all the special effects to be well done. I won't question the story, it seemed as if it were one of those shorts that are left to the imagination.

Over all a 7, good job.

Score: 8

"Very well done"

submission: Autumn War

date: November 20, 2006

I enjoyed this submission very much. The theme of destroying undead, and zombies is just something that just hits the spot. I liked your combat style, aswell as how you advanced on the playing field.

The main thing i would suggest, is better graphics. If your not animating something (such as icons) it should be more than a simple dot, or in the case of the character icons, they could have been more detailed. It just adds to the value of the ofsubmission graphic wise.

Score: 10

"I enjoyed..."

submission: Unforgotten Realms: Epi2

date: July 28, 2006

this reminded me of 8bit D&D, but it was funny. Any gamer, exspecially one who has played dice games, should indeed find this funny. I didnt care for the graphics though, and almost blammed it before watching, but my kind heart gave it a try, and it surpased my initial judgement.

good job.