Score: 5

"Amazing story board"

submission: StoryBoard 1

date: August 2, 2008

You can tell you put a lot of work into this. You need to resubmit it with a title page/loader and give a brief introduction as to what it is, or else other NG user will see it as trash.

This is a great example for new animators to get a sense of what it takes to make a animated short. Extablishing a Animatic prior to jumping into all the detail really helps make a story and animation crisp.

Your drawings are well done, and you have a great look to your project already. Keep it up, and I look forward to seeing the final product.

Score: 8

"I enjoyed it..."

submission: Noidzor

date: August 1, 2007

For an old school styled game, you really added you own unique flavor. As was suggested, I think you should definitely work on the graphics a little more.

As a fan of role playing, and fantasy, I liked the theme. I played until I died, and felt challenged at each level.

If your interested in developing a newer version, I'd more than glad to help with the graphics. Simply check out my website, or contact me here on NG.

Score: 7

"Very nice look"

submission: TRACER episode 1

date: July 22, 2007

The look of it was amazing, and you definitely got a feel for the atmosphere within the animation. The shortness really kills that feeling, I'm sure you put a lot of work into animating this, but to really keep your viewers glued is to give them more of this in one dose.

Over all great work!